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name one thing you would add or subtract here (you can't do both).

8 comments:

Carlene said...

I would add something at her neck. Well, my neck, if I were wearing it, because my neck is a pencil neck, just like hers, and everything else covered up with an exposed pencil neck looks weird and also cold. A big textural scarf wrapped a la Balenciaga in dark charcoal, to match the pants.

Iheartfashion said...

Ooooh, my favorite colors! This is tough because I love the whole thing as is, but I'd probably add a shirt under the coat if it was me, because I can see her bare arm through the vent and that's got to be chilly! I like Carlene's idea too-a scarf is always good.

TravelGretta said...

I love this outfit, but really hate the tights-with-open-toed-shoes business.
But if I removed the shoes, she'd be wandering around in the tights.

Okay, nevermind, I'm going to add a pair of black gloves.

editor said...

well now i feel bad for her neck - i think maybe the extreme collar that extends beyond her shoulders might create or exaggerate the... pencil effect.

i think i would plug up the sleeve vents. though i guess if the jacket is a part of the outfit and must remain on, they might help her from over-heating... in that case, maybe i would show a bit of her hair - little ends from a bob, or a sleek ponytail, just something to humanize the hat a bit.

travelgretta do not go anywhere near my other blog. on occasion, i most definitely wear tights with open-toe shoes.

The Glossy Editor said...

Hmm...I'd quiche the hat (that's a minus) and add a turtleneck. I know I was only supposed to do one or the other but the hat is too gimmiky off the runway. Bisous,

landis said...

i would X the audience. they are getting in the way of that really chic girl enjoying herself.

Candid Cool said...

+ black turtleneck underneath.

editor said...

landis, that is very creative editing.

the neck is really a sore spot it seems. very interesting, because i didn't see that really, and now i do.